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hi im savana, tell me what you think

                                                                                             #1

What is life suppose to be?

People say it’s a bought hopes and dreams,

 well it makes me want to scream!

Everyone is in titled to hopes, and even dreams,

but really it’s just a big theme of how life they say is suppose to be.

“ As they would probably say” I had dreams, but we are here for a purpose.

Not to follow hopes, and dreams but be who we were meant to be.

  Let fate put us in our place, and not fallow the footsteps of  deceit.

So you see to me, Life is a big scheme of this picture perfect life

that was indeed intended to be!

#2

I love you, you love me it’s meant to be.

Can we see, that it’s always meant to be, just you and me?

How could Iet myself fall in to this disease,

that no one see’s?
It’s like a tornado that pulls you in,

and at some time has to spit you out.

Love can be a gorgeous thing to you and me,

even if we can see it lasting for eternity.

Love is a beautiful thing not a disease,

well at least to me for the time being!

Post edited 3:12 PM - October 24, 2011 by αωşōṃε_Đїмṗłεş_ẕŏŽŌ

awwwwwww so touching GIRL *hugs*

I liked it when u say

I love you, you love me it’s meant to be.

Can we see, that it’s always meant to be, just you and me?

okay i will tell ya ma opinion u did GREAT !

so keep on writing until you reach to the top and im sure you can do it =)

all wishes,

zozo