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marissa c. baker said:

this candle is lit as im waiting in the dark

waiting for the call that will keep me alarmed

im worried concerned wherever did you vanish

your life is my given prize but for you to perish

please rethink all that has occured

wanting and needing you back with me come back i promise no hurt

no more lies nor pain

dont keep me trapped here in rage

luv remember all that we accomplished

just hope you are safe but we will get better i promise

There are two types of poets; those that write from the heart- there is no doubt that their words are full of emotion, and those who have talent. This poem does not represent talent BUT it is full of heartfelt emotion and gives a reader some pleasure in seeing he world through the narrator's eyes.