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Hello I’m new and would like some feedback
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9:27 PM
December 22, 2009


joshsorensonmn

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Minnesota

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Hi everyone. This is my first day here and I just put up 4 new poems. One of them I wrote when I was 15, the other three I wrote just recently. I just wanted to get an idea of what every one else thinks about them so please take some time to check them out and give some feedback. Thanx

11:12 PM
December 22, 2009


i_miss_you

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Heyy i read one of them… I don't remember what it is called. but it was really good…

    I'll be sure to check out the rest:)

                  <33Cassie4eva

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2:08 PM
December 23, 2009


joshsorensonmn

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Minnesota

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Thank you for reading. I really do appreciate your opinion and anyone elses.

8:40 PM
December 23, 2009


i_miss_you

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Post edited 8:40 PM - December 23, 2009 by i_miss_you

But now that i checked out yours… you should check out mine… I made a typo on Blood Red Tears and it says ass instead of all though… :( … oh and nice avatar… lol:)

                  <33Cassie4eva:)

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8:59 PM
December 23, 2009


joshsorensonmn

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Minnesota

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Hey that was good, how do you get inspired like that? Makes me kind of sad though.. But still was good poetry

9:26 PM
December 23, 2009


i_miss_you

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I really don't know… the first line will pop into my head and then i just keep on going from there… My mom believes that it is in my blood because my birth mom likes poetry and is really good and my birth grandmother writes books… So truely idk… I just enjoy writing… I might know my insiration when I'm older though…

                   <33Cassie4eva:)

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