Poems Only - Topic: please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Sarah Veinot on please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Tue, 23 Mar 2010 14:18:27 -0500

I really loved that poem ! It was very well written .

i_miss_you on please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Fri, 08 Jan 2010 21:40:14 -0600

That was really good… i love shooting stars… Thay are beautiful… But planes ruin everything:]]

firevixen on please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Wed, 06 Jan 2010 09:51:11 -0600

Nice, I like it ...

joshsorensonmn on please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Tue, 05 Jan 2010 09:36:20 -0600

That's a really good poem. It made me happy until I got to the end where you realize it's a plane. Good stuff though

riyah.darling on please comment honestly,A poem i wrote called ... A wish upon a shooting star.

Sat, 02 Jan 2010 18:14:48 -0600

The bleak winds of the darkened night
tickled my spine, as I grasped my chair tightly.
My eyes were focused on nothing more that night,
than the single shooting star that was shining so brightly.

My wishes we're clear and aloud they were spoken
I wished that all hearts, could never be broken.
I wished for the world to be free from all disease
that wish seemed to echo, travelling in the breeze.

I wished for a world where war is unknown
I wished for a world, where there's no need to ever be alone.

I wished for a world full of love and affection
I wished for a world without fear and rejection

I wished for a world without sadness and tears,
I'd been hoping to wish upon a shooting star for years.

But just as I recited my wishes as listed,
I realised that no shooting star had even existed.
My hope was thrown, and ever so twisted.

… Sadly my shooting star was just a plane travelling far in the distance.