Poems Only - Topic: comment my poem plss http://www.poemsonly.com/community/poetry-discussion/comment-my-poem-plss Simple:Press Forum Version 4.0.2 i_miss_you on comment my poem plss http://www.poemsonly.com/community/poetry-discussion/comment-my-poem-plss/#p198 Poetry Discussion http://www.poemsonly.com/community/poetry-discussion/comment-my-poem-plss/#p198 This was really good:]   Did you put it on the New Poems list thingy?? Cause i think i might have read it before.. It seems really familiar.... But. ya... Thats really good:]

]]> Wed, 13 Jan 2010 22:14:35 -0600 Milton26 on comment my poem plss http://www.poemsonly.com/community/poetry-discussion/comment-my-poem-plss/#p196 Poetry Discussion http://www.poemsonly.com/community/poetry-discussion/comment-my-poem-plss/#p196 Where to find my inspiration

if there’s only war and hate

across the nation

How can I write something beautiful

With all this pressure?

UH! This makes me so mad

Does it all my poetry have to be sad?

that’s it I wont write anymore

I guess there’s no more love left in this world

Only this bad tension

That makes me enter a stage of depression

Where all my writing has a melancholic theme,

There’s no happy moment

No happy thing

Now even my own writing makes me sad

O! this turn out to be so bad.

Now I am full of confusion,

But suddenly I came to a solution

I’ve got to find me a muse

A beautiful girl that will keep me amuse

Someone that will take away this pressure,

And bring back my beautiful inspiration.

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