Poems Only - Topic: Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback Simple:Press Forum Version 4.0.2 i_miss_you on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p163 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p163 I really don't know... the first line will pop into my head and then i just keep on going from there... My mom believes that it is in my blood because my birth mom likes poetry and is really good and my birth grandmother writes books... So truely idk... I just enjoy writing... I might know my insiration when I'm older though...

                   <33Cassie4eva:)

]]> Wed, 23 Dec 2009 21:26:49 -0600 joshsorensonmn on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p156 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p156 Hey that was good, how do you get inspired like that? Makes me kind of sad though.. But still was good poetry

]]> Wed, 23 Dec 2009 20:59:19 -0600 i_miss_you on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p155 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p155 But now that i checked out yours… you should check out mine… I made a typo on Blood Red Tears and it says ass instead of all though… :( ... oh and nice avatar... lol:)

                  <33Cassie4eva:)

]]> Wed, 23 Dec 2009 20:40:06 -0600 joshsorensonmn on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p138 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p138 Thank you for reading. I really do appreciate your opinion and anyone elses.

]]> Wed, 23 Dec 2009 14:08:11 -0600 i_miss_you on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p134 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p134 Heyy i read one of them... I don't remember what it is called. but it was really good...

    I'll be sure to check out the rest:)

                  <33Cassie4eva

]]> Tue, 22 Dec 2009 23:12:00 -0600 joshsorensonmn on Hello I'm new and would like some feedback http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p133 Meet Community Members http://www.poemsonly.com/community/meet-community-members/hello-im-new-and-would-like-some-feedback/#p133 Hi everyone. This is my first day here and I just put up 4 new poems. One of them I wrote when I was 15, the other three I wrote just recently. I just wanted to get an idea of what every one else thinks about them so please take some time to check them out and give some feedback. Thanx

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