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Be my Valentine rose

Red roses were her favorites. Her name was also Rose.
Every year her husband sent them, tied with pretty bows.
The year he died, the roses were delivered to her door.
The card said, “Be my Valentine,” like all the years before.

Each year he sent her roses, and the note would always say,
“I love you even more this year, than last year on this day.
My love for you will always grow, with every passing year.”
She knew this was the last time that the roses would appear.

She thought, he ordered roses in advance before this day.
Her loving husband did not know that he would pass away.
He always liked to do things early, way before the time.
Then, if he got too busy, everything would work out fine.

She cut the stems, and placed them in a very special vase.
Then, placed the vase beside the portrait of his smiling face.
She would sit for hours, in her husband’s favorite chair.
While staring at his picture, and looking at the roses there.

A year went by, and it was hard to live without her mate.
With loneliness and solitude, that had become her fate.
Then, the very hour, as on Valentines before.
The doorbell rang, and there were roses, sitting by her door.

She brought the roses in, and then just looked at them in shock.
Then, went to get the telephone, to call the florist shop.
The owner answered, and she asked him, if he would explain,
Why would someone do this to her, causing her such pain?

“I know your husband passed away, more than a year ago,”
The owner said, “I knew you would call, and you would want to know.
“The flowers you received today, were paid for in advance.
Your husband always planned ahead, he left nothing to chance.”

“There is a standing order, which I have on file down here,
and he has paid, well in advance, you will get the roses every year.
There also is another thing, which I think you should know,
He wrote a special little card…he did this many years ago.

Then, should ever, I find out that he is no longer here,
That is the card…that should be sent, to you the following year.”
She thanked him and hung up the phone, her tears was now flowing hard.
Her fingers were shaking, as she slowly reached to get the card.

Inside the card, she saw that he had written her a note.
Then, as she stared in total silence, this is what he wrote…
“Hello my love, I know it is been a year since I have been gone,
I hope it has not been too hard for you to overcome.

I know it must be lonely, and the pain is very real.
For if it was the other way, I know how I would feel.
The love we shared made everything so beautiful in life.
I loved you more than words could say, you were the perfect wife.

You were my friend and lover, you fulfilled my every need.
I know it is only been a year, but please try not to grieve.
I want you to be happy, even when you shed your tears.
That is why the roses will be sent to you for years.

When you get these roses, think of all the happiness,
that we had together, and how both of us were blessed.
I have always loved you and I know I always will.
However, my love, you must go on, you have some living still.

Please… try to find happiness, while living out your days.
I know it is not easy, but I hope you find some ways.
The roses will come every year, and they will only stop,
when your door is not answered, when the florist stops to knock.

He will come five times that day, in case you have gone out.
But after his last visit, he will know without a doubt,
to take the roses to the place, where I have instructed him,
and place the roses where we are, together once again.”

by Line Kjergaard

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1 christine April 21, 2009 at 3:17 PM

that was such an awesome poem it made me want to cry it was very touching

2 Poems Only April 21, 2009 at 3:24 PM

Wow yep, I have watery eyes. Such a wonderful poem and story. Just wonderful!

3 Line Kjergaard April 22, 2009 at 4:21 AM

thank you guys :)

4 kenya April 22, 2009 at 8:23 AM

very touching and ever so sweet

5 natasha April 22, 2009 at 10:55 AM

that wuz a very touching and inspiring poem. i have tears in my eyes.

6 Kassy April 22, 2009 at 11:01 AM

this was a wonderful poem very touching my eyes stared watering when i read it!! <3 but it was a good poem =D

7 kristin April 22, 2009 at 9:38 PM

wow this poem is so delicate and wonderful well done

8 Kori Che April 23, 2009 at 8:29 PM

i loved this.
its so sad at the beggining, but its
so touching.
one of the best ive ever read.

9 ihearturpoem April 23, 2009 at 8:41 PM

AMAZING POEM! i loved it!

10 janet April 25, 2009 at 12:06 AM

amazing, I love it, well done.

11 Manish April 25, 2009 at 10:19 AM

very very nice… very touching
i mean it like a sad story of two lovers….
Great…..keep it up….

12 browneyes April 25, 2009 at 11:21 AM

WOW!!! AWESOME!!!!

13 chavez April 26, 2009 at 11:24 PM

this poem was the best poem of two lovers i have ever read. it definitely brought tears… you did a great job…

14 lulu April 27, 2009 at 3:23 PM

this is the best poem i have read all day and it just made me cry.
i just love it.

15 maria April 28, 2009 at 11:17 AM

this a very beautiful, sad, and inspiring poem

16 beth April 28, 2009 at 3:48 PM

wow that was amazing. it was so sad.

17 tabassum.shama April 28, 2009 at 7:22 PM

nice poem

18 Emily April 28, 2009 at 8:00 PM

Oh my goodness this poem is so beautiful and I love it. Great job writter, I would love to meet you some day. It was wonderful!!! :) :) :)

19 Jacinta April 29, 2009 at 10:44 PM

I have read this poem somewhere else before reading it on this website. This poem has traveled far and for good reason. Your poem is the true meaning of pure love. Thank you for inspiring me to keep looking for this kind of love. Great job!

20 m v venkataraman May 3, 2009 at 6:22 AM

End is really cruel, Love is a fuel, Loneliness is hell, Love will make one well, This I sadly tell, Love is heart’s bell.

21 TAZZ May 3, 2009 at 7:12 AM

Great poem ,when for the first time i have read it my eyes become wet .
your poems enspires me to write about something that i was planning from a long time .you have proved that true love is forever

22 erica May 3, 2009 at 12:53 PM

it’s an awesome poem
i have no words…
i am just speechless
i myself a poet but it made me cry and think deeply

23 dan McDiffitt May 8, 2009 at 11:46 AM

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24 Alex Appel May 12, 2009 at 9:55 AM

I can’t really find the words to describe this story… Like everyone else has said it truly is great, i hope more will come because it was wonderful.

25 fiona May 15, 2009 at 2:53 AM

a very beautiful poem! thank you for inspiring me, i was touched. wish you could send me more. thanks

26 pookie May 18, 2009 at 12:59 PM

I started 2 cry cause it was so touching

27 chito frito May 19, 2009 at 10:37 AM

wow i only wish that i could have love like that. this poem brought tears to my eyes

28 melly May 21, 2009 at 4:04 PM

very touching

29 Susane C May 22, 2009 at 9:31 AM

Wow…that’s so beautiful. Awesome poem….. that’s love.

30 Justin May 25, 2009 at 6:14 AM

Nice one! It’s sad though, but very touching and inspiring. Keep it up! :)

31 Kristen McKinney May 25, 2009 at 7:11 PM

this was unbelieveablely amazing. i love this so much. made me cry actually.

32 Mercedes June 2, 2009 at 1:05 PM

This is such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.

33 Monica June 5, 2009 at 7:01 AM

The depths of their love came through your words……..Brilliant Poem

34 Jasmine June 7, 2009 at 12:27 PM

i love your poem!! it acutally made me cry!! Great Job

35 k-men June 13, 2009 at 11:43 PM

i lov the poem it is so touching and sad you are a good writer so make more poems like this u must have an A+ in English wow u r really good

36 VASCA June 22, 2009 at 12:54 PM

this is a classic narrative poem, it’s long any way but can touch souls vastly

37 patricia guest June 27, 2009 at 3:02 AM

truly amazing well done

38 Rekha June 30, 2009 at 12:56 PM

hi. very touching.. a tragedy comes in the way of tru luv, but the tru luv overcomes al that to prov its forever.. wrote this comment with tears welled in eyes.. great composition.. keep it up! :)

39 Matthew July 26, 2009 at 6:22 PM

I’ve just chanced across this site and after reading this was compelled to join the site just to pass comment on this poem. A wonderful story conveyed throughout with beautiful imagery - isn’t this what true love and valentine’s is all about? A simply beautiful poem Line.

40 anna July 29, 2009 at 3:38 PM

omg. this is a very inspiring poem. it really touched my heart and i’m seriously about to cry. Wow! good job!

41 J.loeto August 3, 2009 at 6:43 AM

mirror…mirror on the wall, who is the best poet of them all; Line Kjergaard!!!
its the cream of creativity.

42 swati August 23, 2009 at 8:02 AM

amazing..simply gr8..words fall short if i’v 2 describe it..js 2oo gud..

43 fei August 24, 2009 at 8:12 AM

This is all about true luv which is never changing,thanx a lot for da greatpoem which has inspiration,may God be kind and gracious to you.

44 Dawn August 25, 2009 at 8:13 PM

That is the most amazing and beautiful poem I have ever read in my life. I pray that I will one day have a man that loves me the same. God bless.

45 Chriti September 1, 2009 at 7:27 PM

I love the poem its so heart warming absolutely brought tears to my eyes greatest poem I have ever read ……Keep up the good work….very nice =)

46 Susan September 4, 2009 at 11:53 PM

Don’t know how to tell you how much that touched me….

47 Rose September 7, 2009 at 1:38 AM

very touching poem i started to cry while reading it i love it

48 Anonymous Unicorn September 10, 2009 at 6:52 PM

this is totally one of the best poems that i have EVER seen. it’s a wonderful, touching, and loving piece. i hope that my future husband will think of me so.

49 koi September 14, 2009 at 7:50 AM

I want to know that Line Kjergaard is the writer of this story, isn’t she?
It so nice, sad and I like it so much.

50 arafath September 15, 2009 at 10:18 AM

dear superbbb da >>>
i learn a lof from u r website …….

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