Have you ever loved someone,
but you never knew if they existed.
Have you ever cried for someone,
but never knew if they ever took a breath.
Have you ever needed someone so badly,
you’d have to wish among a million stars
just to comfort you.
Those million stars I have tried…
I’ll call if it works.
by Kaity Bartolo
Message from the author: This poem is one I wrote of my emotions to express my longging for my greatest wish and how I will wish among a million stars for it.
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Your poem is one in a million
I like it! I hope you find what your heart wishes for!
Thats so true and pretty. It’s simple but full of longing and depth. When I read this I feel as if my soul/heart is speaking to me… and I’m sure other people who read this poem will feel this also. I really like it. Good Kaity!
that was really cute…lol
love this poem. good job!
a million stars is cool keep up the good work